Paraphrasing

This document explores paraphrasing as a core counselling skill and academic writing technique, covering methods for rephrasing client messages, avoiding plagiarism, and developing effective paraphrasing strategies.

This document examines paraphrasing as both a fundamental counselling skill for rephrasing client messages and an essential academic writing technique. It provides practical strategies for developing effective paraphrasing abilities in therapeutic contexts and scholarly work, emphasizing understanding, accuracy, and authentic expression.


Paraphrasing in Counselling

Paraphrasing is a core skill required in counselling practice. It involves the counsellor rephrasing the content of the client’s message to demonstrate understanding and facilitate therapeutic progress.

Purpose and Applications

Paraphrasing serves several important functions in counselling:

PurposeDescription
Convey understandingDemonstrates that the counsellor has heard and comprehended the client’s message
Encourage elaborationInvites the client to expand on their thoughts and feelings
Simplify communicationHelps clarify complex or confused messages by distilling key points
Verify understandingProvides an opportunity for the client to correct any misinterpretation

Essential Characteristics

Paraphrasing does not mean repeating word-for-word what the client has said. Instead, it involves condensing the client’s message into its key points while maintaining accuracy and conciseness.

When the client has told their story (to use Dr Gerard Egan’s phrase), the counsellor’s task is to summarise the main points and choose a suitable beginning for the paraphrase.


Counselling Paraphrasing Example

Client’s Message (conveyed indirectly): The client has, in a roundabout way, indicated that they do not want to go on holiday with friends and this is causing problems with their partner.

Counsellor’s Paraphrase: “You seem to be saying that you do not want to go on holiday with the friends that you normally go away with because you are no longer relaxed in their company. This is causing a problem with your partner as you can’t talk about it to them.”

This paraphrase captures the essential content of the client’s message, clarifies the situation, and demonstrates understanding while inviting the client to confirm or correct the counsellor’s interpretation.


Additional Counselling Paraphrasing Examples

Effective paraphrasing in counselling can focus on different aspects of the client’s communication. Below are examples demonstrating various approaches:

Example 1: Paraphrasing Content

Client: “I’ve been working late every night this week, and I barely see my kids anymore. My boss keeps giving me more projects, and I can’t say no. My wife is upset with me, but I don’t know what to do about it.”

Poor Paraphrase: “You’ve been working late every night this week and you barely see your kids anymore.” (This merely repeats the client’s words without adding value)

Effective Paraphrase: “It sounds like your work demands are creating a conflict between your professional responsibilities and your family life, and you’re feeling caught in the middle.” (This captures the essential meaning and underlying issue)


Example 2: Paraphrasing Feelings

Client: “I thought I had the promotion in the bag. I’ve been at the company for ten years, I know the job inside out, and then they bring in someone from outside. It’s like they don’t value what I’ve contributed.”

Poor Paraphrase: “You didn’t get the promotion even though you’ve been there for ten years.” (This only states facts without acknowledging feelings)

Effective Paraphrase: “You’re feeling disappointed and undervalued because your loyalty and expertise weren’t recognized when the promotion decision was made.” (This acknowledges both the situation and the emotional response)


Example 3: Paraphrasing Complex Situations

Client: “My mother keeps calling me every day, sometimes multiple times. She wants to know what I’m doing, who I’m seeing, what I’m eating. I know she’s lonely since dad passed away, but I have my own life. I feel guilty when I don’t answer, but I also feel suffocated when I do.”

Poor Paraphrase: “Your mother calls you a lot and it bothers you.” (This oversimplifies and misses the complexity)

Effective Paraphrase: “You’re experiencing a tension between wanting to support your mother through her grief and needing to maintain boundaries for your own well-being, which is leaving you with conflicting feelings of guilt and frustration.” (This captures the complexity and ambivalence)


Paraphrasing Techniques Comparison

TechniqueFocusWhen to UseExample Opening
Content ParaphrasingFacts and eventsWhen clarifying what happened“In other words…” / “So…”
Feeling ParaphrasingEmotions and reactionsWhen acknowledging emotional state“You’re feeling…” / “It seems like…”
Meaning ParaphrasingUnderlying significanceWhen exploring deeper implications“What I hear you saying is…”
Summary ParaphrasingMultiple issuesWhen bringing together several points“Let me see if I’ve understood…”

Common Paraphrasing Pitfalls to Avoid

PitfallDescriptionExample to Avoid
ParrotingSimply repeating client’s exact wordsClient: “I’m stressed.” Counsellor: “You’re stressed.”
Over-interpretingAdding meaning that wasn’t expressedClient mentions work stress → Counsellor assumes childhood trauma
MinimizingDownplaying the client’s experience“It sounds like you’re slightly bothered by that.”
LeadingDirecting the client to your conclusion“So you’re saying you should leave your job, right?”
Over-simplifyingReducing complex issues to simple statementsMissing nuance and ambivalence in client’s message

Paraphrasing Stems for Counsellors

Effective counsellors use varied language to introduce paraphrases. Here are useful opening phrases:

For Content:

  • “So what you’re saying is…”
  • “In other words…”
  • “Let me see if I understand…”
  • “What I’m hearing is…”

For Feelings:

  • “You’re feeling…”
  • “It sounds like you’re experiencing…”
  • “You seem to be…”
  • “There’s a sense of…”

For Checking Understanding:

  • “Correct me if I’m wrong, but…”
  • “Let me check I’ve got this right…”
  • “Help me understand…”
  • “Is it fair to say that…?”

Practice Scenarios

Try paraphrasing these client statements:

Scenario A: “I can’t sleep at night. I keep thinking about all the things that could go wrong at work tomorrow. Even when I’m tired, my mind won’t shut off.”

Consider paraphrasing both content and feelings

Scenario B: “My daughter won’t talk to me anymore. She’s 16 and thinks she knows everything. Whatever I suggest, she does the opposite just to prove a point.”

Consider focusing on the relationship dynamic and emotions

Scenario C: “Everyone expects me to be okay because it’s been six months, but I think about him every single day. People have stopped asking how I am, like I should just be over it by now.”

Consider acknowledging the complexity of grief and social expectations


Academic Paraphrasing Skills

Beyond counselling contexts, paraphrasing represents a crucial skill for academic and professional writing. The ability to express information from sources in original words demonstrates comprehension and maintains academic integrity.

Importance of Academic Paraphrasing

Paraphrasing is fundamental to academic work because it enables writers to use information from textbooks, journal articles, and other sources while avoiding plagiarism. Plagiarism occurs when someone uses another person’s work without proper attribution, presenting it as their own.

Effective paraphrasing demonstrates that the writer understands the content well enough to express it in original language. This skill is essential throughout academic study and professional practice.


Five Key Strategies for Effective Paraphrasing1

Strategy 1: Avoid Synonym Replacement

Simply replacing words in original text with synonyms from a word processor’s thesaurus function is ineffective and easily detected. This approach produces several problems:

  • Creates sloppy, difficult-to-read prose
  • Results in awkward word choices that do not fit the context
  • Fails to demonstrate genuine understanding
  • Is readily identified by experienced readers

Effective paraphrasing requires writing content from scratch in original language, not merely substituting words within existing sentences.


Strategy 2: Never Copy and Paste Text

Copying and pasting text, even with intentions to modify it later, constitutes plagiarism. This practice should be avoided entirely, with one limited exception: when creating direct quotations.

Direct quotations should be used sparingly and kept brief. When quoting is necessary, proper citation and quotation marks must be used to clearly attribute words to their original author.


Strategy 3: Use Highlighting and Brief Notes

When reading sources, the effective approach involves:

  1. Reading the material thoroughly
  2. Highlighting key points
  3. Taking very brief notes using bullet points (3-6 words maximum)

The brevity of the notes is crucial. Short keyword phrases prevent inadvertent recreation of the original text’s exact phrasing.

Example Process

StepAction
ReadReview the source material carefully
HighlightMark important concepts and information
NoteWrite brief keyword bullet points (3-6 words)
ClosePut the source away, out of sight

Strategy 4: Create Distance from Source Text

After taking brief notes, close the textbook or source document completely. If working digitally, close all windows containing the source material.

Walk away from the workspace for approximately five minutes. This brief interval allows the exact wording of the source to fade from immediate memory, making it less likely to inadvertently reproduce the original phrasing.


Strategy 5: Write from Keywords Only

After the five-minute break, return to the workspace and write the paragraph based solely on the brief keyword notes, without looking at the original source text.

This approach ensures that the new paragraph is genuinely original because:

  • The exact wording has been forgotten
  • Only key concepts are available for reference
  • The writer must construct sentences independently
  • Natural expression in the writer’s own voice emerges

Paraphrasing Success Indicators

When comparing the new paragraph to the original source, successful paraphrasing shows:

  • Different sentence structures
  • Original word choices
  • Authentic expression of ideas
  • No matching phrases or word sequences
  • Clear demonstration of understanding

Academic Paraphrasing Examples

To illustrate effective paraphrasing in academic contexts, consider these examples comparing original text with poor and effective paraphrases:

Example 1: Psychology Concept

Original Text: “Cognitive behavioral therapy (CBT) is based on the idea that our thoughts, feelings, and behaviors are interconnected, and that changing negative thought patterns can lead to changes in feelings and behaviors.”

Poor Paraphrase (Synonym Replacement): “Cognitive behavioural therapy (CBT) is founded on the concept that our thinking, emotions, and actions are linked, and that altering pessimistic thought patterns can result in modifications in emotions and actions.” (This merely substitutes synonyms and maintains the same sentence structure)

Effective Paraphrase: “CBT operates on the principle that there is a relationship between how we think, feel, and act. By modifying destructive thinking patterns, practitioners help clients transform both their emotional responses and behavioral patterns (Smith, 2020).” (This restructures the information, uses original phrasing, and demonstrates understanding)


Example 2: Research Finding

Original Text: “The study found that participants who engaged in regular mindfulness meditation for eight weeks reported significantly lower stress levels and improved sleep quality compared to the control group.”

Poor Paraphrase (Copying with Minor Changes): “The research discovered that subjects who participated in regular mindfulness meditation for 8 weeks reported much lower stress levels and better sleep quality compared to the control group.” (This maintains the original structure with minimal changes)

Effective Paraphrase: “After two months of consistent mindfulness practice, research participants demonstrated notable improvements in both stress management and sleep patterns when measured against those who did not meditate (Jones & Williams, 2021).” (This reorganizes the information with original sentence structure and vocabulary)


Example 3: Complex Theory

Original Text: “Social constructionism suggests that knowledge and reality are not objective truths waiting to be discovered, but rather are constructed through social processes and interactions within specific cultural and historical contexts.”

Poor Paraphrase (Too Close to Original): “Social constructionism proposes that knowledge and reality are not objective facts waiting to be found, but instead are built through social processes and interactions within particular cultural and historical settings.” (This follows the original too closely despite changing some words)

Effective Paraphrase: “According to social constructionist theory, what we understand as knowledge emerges from collective social experiences rather than existing as independent facts. This perspective emphasizes how cultural and historical circumstances shape our understanding of reality (Brown, 2019).” (This demonstrates genuine understanding by restructuring and explaining in different terms)


Academic Paraphrasing Checklist

Use this checklist to evaluate your paraphrases:

CriterionCheckDetails
Structure ChangedSentence order and construction differ from original
Vocabulary OriginalUsing different words (not just synonyms)
Length VariesParaphrase may be shorter or longer than original
Meaning PreservedCore ideas remain accurate and complete
Citation IncludedProper reference to original source
No Copied PhrasesNo sequences of 3+ words match the original
Understanding ShownDemonstrates comprehension, not just word swapping

When to Quote vs. Paraphrase

Understanding when to use direct quotations versus paraphrasing is essential:

Use Direct Quotes When:Use Paraphrasing When:
The author’s exact wording is particularly powerful or eloquentYou can express the idea more clearly or concisely
You’re analyzing the specific language usedYou’re summarizing general ideas or concepts
The statement is a well-known phrase or definitionYou’re integrating multiple sources
Paraphrasing would lose important nuanceThe original contains unnecessary detail
You’re providing evidence for a controversial claimYou want to maintain your writing’s flow and voice

Comparing Counselling and Academic Paraphrasing

While counselling and academic paraphrasing serve different purposes, they share common principles:

AspectCounselling ParaphrasingAcademic Paraphrasing
PurposeDemonstrate understanding of client’s messageExpress source information in original words
Key SkillCondensing client’s words to core meaningReconstructing ideas without copying text
AvoidanceWord-for-word repetitionPlagiarism and synonym replacement
RequirementAccuracy and concisenessOriginality and comprehension
BenefitTherapeutic rapport and clarityAcademic integrity and learning

Both forms require genuine engagement with the original message and the ability to express ideas authentically while maintaining the essential meaning.


Conclusion

Paraphrasing represents a fundamental skill with applications in both therapeutic and academic contexts. In counselling, paraphrasing enables practitioners to demonstrate understanding, encourage client elaboration, simplify complex messages, and verify comprehension. Effective counselling paraphrases condense the client’s communication to its essential points while remaining accurate and concise.

In academic writing, paraphrasing allows scholars to incorporate source material while avoiding plagiarism and demonstrating genuine understanding. The five key strategies—avoiding synonym replacement, never copying and pasting, using brief notes, creating distance from source text, and writing from keywords only—provide a systematic approach to developing strong paraphrasing skills.

Both forms of paraphrasing require moving beyond surface-level word substitution to achieve authentic expression of ideas in original language. Mastery of paraphrasing enhances professional effectiveness in counselling practice and academic work, supporting clear communication, ethical practice, and deep engagement with material.


FAQ

Paraphrasing is a core counselling skill that involves rephrasing the content of the client’s message to demonstrate understanding and facilitate therapeutic progress.

The main purposes include:

  • Conveying understanding of the client’s message
  • Encouraging the client to elaborate on their thoughts
  • Simplifying complex or confused messages
  • Verifying understanding and giving clients opportunity to correct misinterpretations

Paraphrasing involves condensing the client’s message into key points while maintaining accuracy and conciseness, rather than word-for-word repetition. It requires capturing essential meaning in original language.

Academic paraphrasing enables writers to use information from sources while avoiding plagiarism. It demonstrates that the writer understands content well enough to express it in original language.

Plagiarism occurs when someone uses another person’s work without proper attribution, presenting it as their own. This includes copying text without citation or acknowledgment.

Using synonyms function creates sloppy prose, results in awkward word choices that do not fit the context, fails to demonstrate genuine understanding, and is readily identified by experienced readers.

Avoid synonym replacement. Effective paraphrasing requires writing content from scratch in original language, not merely substituting words within existing sentences.

No. Copying and pasting text, even with intentions to modify it later, constitutes plagiarism. The only exception is when creating properly cited direct quotations.

Notes should be very brief bullet points (3-6 words maximum). The process involves:

  • Reading material thoroughly
  • Highlighting key points
  • Writing brief keyword phrases
  • Closing the source completely

Short keyword phrases prevent inadvertent recreation of the original text’s exact phrasing, ensuring the paraphrase will be genuinely original.

This brief interval allows the exact wording of the source to fade from immediate memory, making it less likely to inadvertently reproduce the original phrasing.

After taking brief notes and walking away for five minutes, write paragraphs based solely on keyword notes without looking at the original source text. This ensures genuine originality.

Successful paraphrasing shows:

  • Different sentence structures
  • Original word choices
  • Authentic expression of ideas
  • No matching phrases or word sequences
  • Clear demonstration of understanding

Both require genuine engagement with the original message and the ability to express ideas authentically while maintaining essential meaning. Both avoid word-for-word repetition and require accuracy.

Counselling paraphrasing demonstrates understanding of client messages to facilitate therapy, while academic paraphrasing expresses source information in original words to avoid plagiarism.

A counselling paraphrase should capture essential meaning of the client’s communication, demonstrate genuine understanding, remain concise and accurate, and invite the client to confirm or correct the interpretation.

Direct quotations should be used sparingly and kept brief. When necessary, proper citation and quotation marks must be used to clearly attribute words to their original author.

Dr Gerard Egan refers to the client telling their story. The counsellor’s task is then to summarise the main points and choose a suitable beginning for the paraphrase.

Paraphrasing provides an opportunity for the client to correct any misinterpretation, ensuring the counsellor has accurately understood the client’s message.

Mastery requires moving beyond surface-level word substitution to achieve authentic expression of ideas in original language, demonstrating deep engagement with material through practice and systematic application of effective strategies.

References


  1. Helpful Professor. (n.d.). How to Paraphrase (In 5 Simple Steps) [Video]. YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j3A0UVGrjb8 ↩︎